a deep verse

Emotions run deep, My heart almost falls into its deepest sleep
A cold shiver on my back so severe Makes me almost mentally disappear
I feel the end is near thats my biggest fear Cant see anything clear
I feel myself dieing Or most of the time Internally crying
But sometimes im still shinin and you try to work yourself back up
But than you get struck back down With a power thats so profound
Ands the moment when we reach out to the bottles
Or take a drugoverdose just like our rolemodels
But that just aint the right decision
And i hope you never get to be in this position, So listen
To your heart so i doesn’t fall apart
Just be smart from the start And try to realise your dreams
Picture yourself in a perfect scene no weird people acting lean and mean
Just you the music and a lil bit of green.

should i record it or not and say if its ill or not :d

wel iedereen leest et op zen eigen tempo en stijl é
dus moeje et in feitte wel ipnemen daw de flow kunnen horen
en tga veel beter zien met de beat é peace out